My heartbeat

Each beat feels like a muffled rumble,
Like it’s too hurt to beat all the way.
Between each beat is a pause,
That makes me think that my heart is going to stop,
But without fail,
The rumble starts again.

Quiet and slow,
Without any rhythm or flow,
It spreads like an echo.


© 2018. Vishal Dutia. All Rights Reserved.
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5 Comments Add yours

  1. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come read and listen to – MY NEW HEARTBEAT!

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  2. “Between each beat is a pause”. This rhythm of the heart tells us the way all activity should be-steady, with the proper pacing.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Fabulous very well said sir

      Like

  3. Love the line, “like it’s too hurt to beat all the way.” I think we’ve all felt like that when life gets overwhelming. Well said.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      😊

      Like

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