Faces #Poetry

Saw 847 faces
Driving 847 cars
Traffic in
Traffic out
Passed by 49 faces
Walking 49 different ways
Made eyes with
1
And she still
Wasn’t you
Why couldn’t
1
Of them be
U

©VishalDutia

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14 Comments Add yours

  1. Wow!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 😊

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  2. Loved this.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 💐💐💐

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  3. Jayshree says:

    😍😍😍😍

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      💐💐

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  4. Kinjal Jain says:

    Short and sweet!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  5. Excellent my friend, excellent, quirky and fun 🙂

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  6. Poornima V says:

    Beautiful

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  7. Ssameera :) says:

    Lovely..! and clever write up 🙂

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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