In the closed eyes of the open dreams. #Poetry

In the closed eyes
Of the open dreams
There is a face

It’s hard to say
How much is it yours
How much is it mine

In the closed eyes
Of the open dreams
There is a face

Now I began to talk about you
In every matter of mine
Now I’ll stay with your forever

Don’t leave me, meet me
Now you have more right
On me than myself

In the closed eyes
Of the open dreams
In the closed eyes
Of the open dreams
Someone lives

©VishalDutia

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11 Comments Add yours

  1. PoetSpeak says:

    Moving

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  2. Oh so touching. Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  3. Francina says:

    beautifully written poem.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  4. I am always taken by those I meet in dreams.

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  5. Wow… Beautiful sentiment.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  6. Anita Bacha says:

    Simply awesome 💖

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

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