My Heart Looks Like. #Poetry

My heart is starting to look like my converse.
Dirty and worn, but fully functional.
No holes.

My heart is starting to look like my notebooks.
Missing the cover and a few pages here and there,
but, still full of plenty of worthwhile content.

My heart is starting to act like my cat.
really means well and playful
but, isn’t very good with strangers
or people in general, really. 

I guess that it’s a slow build.
Two steps forward and one step back, is still movement.
I know it’s not the saying, but I’m an optimist.
I fuck up less often than I get shit right.

Bad things come in threes and I think I’ve bought myself some time.

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12 Comments Add yours

  1. ,😘😘😘
    πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
    I like you.
    Ur heart looks gorgeous place to be.
    Lots of love and hugs:)
    Jay:)

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you mam,,😊

      Like

  2. PoetSpeak says:

    These words were nice to read except the second to the last line. There is thoughtful and original imagery.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  3. Arena Job says:

    It was good but I guess a little rhyme would be even more rocking πŸ˜€

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Yaa agree

      Like

  4. I love the comparison. It makes the poem so vivid!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

  5. This is so gooooood
    Did you make the comparisons using the first things that came up in your mind? Cause it feels like it haha
    But it’s so good and I love the final lines πŸ˜€

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Hahaha thanks

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Alexander says:

    nice thoughts

    Liked by 1 person

    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

      Like

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