All of you #Poetry

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Your touch.
It send jolts
Of electricity
Through my veins.
Your smile.
It sends swarms
Of butterflies
Through my body.
Your voice.
It soothes me
On horrible days.
You.
All of you.
Is what’s saving me.

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  1. Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 💐😊

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  2. musicgirl19 says:

    Beautiful and so relatable! ❤️💜

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 💐

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  3. chocotales says:

    Oh, this is so beautiful. Love it 💜

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  4. Jayshree says:

    Wow!!! I loved the end. All of you is saving me😍

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  5. Loner rhymes says:

    The ending was just so perfect and the way you put it all up, it was really good 🖤

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 💐

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  6. Your words. Works so real every time 🙂

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you💐

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  7. Anita Bacha says:

    Beautiful.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  8. mishotis20 says:

    Love the flow of words. Especially the last line: All of you is saving me.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Glad you liked it means a lot. Thank you.

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  9. Tammy7711 says:

    Wow! Beautiful ❤

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  10. So much joy and amor, coming from the magic of India, including this lovely verse! The magnet of all this romance is pulling very strongly.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Than you sir 💐

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  11. Robert Jass says:

    Breathtaking! How do u create visuals like that?

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      I think if all have just we need to realize it

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