Broken and Formed #Poetry

The thing that shapes us
Is the thing that breaks us

The pain of the past
Brings joy that will last

From a fire
That can incinerate
Comes metal
With strength as a trait

Just remember it may hurt now, but it will pay off later.

4 thoughts on “Broken and Formed #Poetry”

Jayshree says:

November 5, 2017 at 7:24 pm

Beautiful warrior.. You are star, a winner
Lots of love
Hugs
Jay🌹

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1. VishalDutia says:
  
  November 5, 2017 at 7:51 pm
  
  Thank you mam. It means a lot.💐
  
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Vearna says:

November 5, 2017 at 9:10 pm

Very nice VishalDutia. I like this lots. “From a fire that can incinerate, comes metal with strength as a trait.” Our traits are so strong, it is one of the marks of who we are truly.

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1. VishalDutia says:
  
  November 5, 2017 at 9:15 pm
  
  Thank you mam.. never give up.
  
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