For my first true love. #Poetry

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The most amazing girl I had ever met;

yet I was too stupid to see.

I regret what I did;

I’m sorry for the way I used to be.

It’s not who I am anymore;

That monster wasn’t really me.

How was I able to treat you like this…

While I felt so good during our first kiss..

I broke your heart…

Even though you loved me from the start…

Now I’m laying here crying my heart out;

Thinking, will you ever forget?

Will you forever feel pain and regret?

I don’t want to lose you;

Let me make up for all the shit.

I truly never wanted to hurt you like this,

Yet I did an even now I still unwillingly do.

You’re as beautiful as cherry blossom drifting trough the air.

I love your deep eyes, your soft lips,

your perfect body and your dark hair.

When I’m with you all I can do is stare.

Stare at your mesmerizing beauty.

I know you will never believe me, but it’s true…

You’re amazing and I love you.

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18 Comments Add yours

  1. Hope it all works out, Vishal!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Nvr leave hope. Thank you

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  2. Pixie Wayne says:

    So beautiful. It takes such strength and courage to admit we were wrong and took someone for granted. I hope the object of your affection will give you another chance.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      hope never dies and gives you strength.. thank you

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  3. Amazing poem. Write well 🌹

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  4. Deep and sad
    so real

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Glad you liked thank you

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  5. Very real

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you 💐

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  6. Anand Bose says:

    Beautifully written Anand Bose from Kerala

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you Vishal Dutia from mumbai

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  7. What a lovely poem and let me join the others in wishing that it all works out for you. Plus, I came here to offer my thanks for your recent decision to follow Learning from Dogs. Thank you!!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you glad you liked it

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  8. olivera77 says:

    Very touching…..!!!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  9. bhanugautam says:

    Beautiful and touching lines

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thanks a lot

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