I wish my life was like a poem
then I would be beautiful.
I would have rhythm, cadence, imagery;
my rhymes they would be plentiful.
I would have stanzas of separation,
my life would be in order.
They would build upon each other
from beginning to end –– clear borders.
Someone would have infused emotion,
clear meaning to my words;
something mysteriously discernible
the lack of which does hurt.
Instead I‘m just a jumble of
unnecessary words and phrases.
No clear anything at all,
No future meaning to the ages.
Vishal Dutia 
Nice one!
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This is truly excellent. Reblogged on davidbruceblog.
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WOW! Beautifully written and expressed! Love it!
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This is so beautiful and thoughtful! Congratulations.
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In searching for poetry
Within our lives
We learn to see
Mess
And make it
Our story
Of unruly stanzas
Dragging on past our comfort
No rhyme or reason
Free
Handed
And full of purpose
That makes no sense
In the moment
So we seek the people
Who say
Your poetry
Has no rules
Because you
Were born
To make your own.
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Ooohhhh wow what a lovely poetic comment
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Lovely imagination 👌keep writing my friend
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Not yet… perhaps you are in a season of brain storm… Life will complete stanzas in season:)
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I like reading through an article that will make people think.
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HI VISHAL ! THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY ! THANKS FOR STOPPING BY AND APPRECIATING MY BLOG. PLEASE DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS !
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Thank you.. Yaa surely will go through regularly i too loved your work
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just awesome and beautiful
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Thank you 💕😊
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Anyone who writes so well from the heart…their life IS a poem and it DOES express beauty. Thanks for sharing such a heart felt piece 🙂
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Thank you
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Poetry is life and life is poetry my friend. You say “I would have stanzas of separation,
my life would be in order.
They would build upon each other
from beginning to end –– clear borders.
Well this is not a guaranteed with a poem either. But no matter how ordered or chaotic, still poetry depicts life. Thanks for stopping by Poemattic.
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Gonna add these lines soon. Superb. Thank you
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Wonderful poem👌👌
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Thank you
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There is no challenge if there are clear boundaries …..like me i think even you have a happy life solving these jumbled and messy knitted threads of life …….one day ends will meet ……
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Brilliant – love this!
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Thank you
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really beautiful , and kind of fantastic 🙂
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Thank you
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Your poem made me wish my life was also a poetry…
i have a few poems about life on my blog
mirage.blog
you mite like it.
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Thank you yaa sure will go through
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I love this poem–expresses what I feel too.
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lovely poem….each and every world are so delightful
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Thank u
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