I Wish My Life Was Like A Poem #Poetry

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I wish my life was like a poem

then I would be beautiful.

I would have rhythm, cadence, imagery;

my rhymes they would be plentiful. 

 

I would have stanzas of separation,

my life would be in order.

They would build upon each other

from beginning to end clear borders.

 

Someone would have infused emotion,

clear meaning to my words;

something mysteriously discernible

the lack of which does hurt.

 

Instead Im just a jumble of

unnecessary words and phrases.

No clear anything at all,

No future meaning to the ages.

 

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32 Comments Add yours

  1. Nice one!

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  2. Reblogged this on davidbruceblog and commented:
    This is truly excellent. Reblogged on davidbruceblog.

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  3. WOW! Beautifully written and expressed! Love it!

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  4. Ananya says:

    This is so beautiful and thoughtful! Congratulations.

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  5. In searching for poetry
    Within our lives
    We learn to see
    Mess

    And make it
    Our story
    Of unruly stanzas
    Dragging on past our comfort
    No rhyme or reason

    Free

    Handed

    And full of purpose
    That makes no sense
    In the moment

    So we seek the people
    Who say

    Your poetry
    Has no rules

    Because you
    Were born

    To make your own.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Ooohhhh wow what a lovely poetic comment

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  6. Jayshree says:

    Lovely imagination πŸ‘Œkeep writing my friend

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  7. Kae Bucher says:

    Not yet… perhaps you are in a season of brain storm… Life will complete stanzas in season:)

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  9. priyaajit says:

    HI VISHAL ! THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY ! THANKS FOR STOPPING BY AND APPRECIATING MY BLOG. PLEASE DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS !

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you.. Yaa surely will go through regularly i too loved your work

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  10. just awesome and beautiful

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you πŸ’•πŸ˜Š

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  12. Anyone who writes so well from the heart…their life IS a poem and it DOES express beauty. Thanks for sharing such a heart felt piece πŸ™‚

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      πŸ˜ŠπŸ’

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  14. nickafric says:

    Reblogged this on nickngila.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  15. Poetry is life and life is poetry my friend. You say “I would have stanzas of separation,

    my life would be in order.

    They would build upon each other

    from beginning to end –– clear borders.

    Well this is not a guaranteed with a poem either. But no matter how ordered or chaotic, still poetry depicts life. Thanks for stopping by Poemattic.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Gonna add these lines soon. Superb. Thank you

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  16. garimadhankhar12 says:

    Wonderful poemπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  17. There is no challenge if there are clear boundaries …..like me i think even you have a happy life solving these jumbled and messy knitted threads of life …….one day ends will meet ……

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      πŸ‘

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  18. Brilliant – love this!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  19. really beautiful , and kind of fantastic πŸ™‚

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  20. true mirage says:

    Your poem made me wish my life was also a poetry…
    i have a few poems about life on my blog
    mirage.blog
    you mite like it.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you yaa sure will go through

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