My heart
Is a happy drunk
A little too open
A little too optimistic
It‘s over in the corner of the bar
Playing poker
Screaming at the top of it‘s lungs
I‘M ALL IN
When it‘s never
To this day
Had a winning hand
My heart
Is a sad drunk
A little too lonely
A little too caught up in tears
It‘s over at the counter
Forcing the bartender to take its keys
Because it would rather not go home
Than go home alone again
My heart
Is a reckless drunk
A little too unbalanced
A little too impaired
It‘s over by the door
Making everyone nervous
A little too good at scaring people away
A little too far gone
Like you
A little too far gone
Turn your head
Shuffle away and pretend you don‘t notice
The breakdown of a heart
Too drunk on feelings
To know when to stop
Vishal Dutia 
Love the comparisons, very nice
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Great post. A single poem described a hell of thousand emotions.
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Wow!
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Wow! Such an emotion provoking poem
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Thank you mam
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A really good poem!
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Thank you
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I really do like this. It gives me a great feeling of positivity, there’s so much happiness in this.
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Thank You
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the smooth transition in the poem is indeed a highlight with tinge of witty comparison sure is cool work.!
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WOW!! So very me! Thank you, I love this
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Thank you for lovely appreciation. 💐💐💐
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Awakes compassion this poem. Love, Isabella
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A really beautiful one….
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Lovely poem. Unusual and interesting. Think it would be a lot more readable though if you didn’t use the yellow unless that was deliberate on your part – makes it difficult to read. Also, as a fellow poet (www.andreaneidle.wordpress.com), hope you won’t be offended if I say to check your punctuation of it’s (as in its lungs) – no apostrophe needed!
Best wishes, Andrea
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enjoyed the extended metaphor and its directional progression.
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Thank you sir😊
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