My heart #Poetry

My heart

Is a happy drunk

A little too open

A little too optimistic 

Its over in the corner of the bar

Playing poker

Screaming at the top of its lungs

IM ALL IN

When its never 

To this day

Had a winning hand

My heart

Is a sad drunk

A little too lonely

A little too caught up in tears

Its over at the counter

Forcing the bartender to take its keys

Because it would rather not go home

Than go home alone again

My heart

Is a reckless drunk

A little too unbalanced

A little too impaired

Its over by the door 

Making everyone nervous

A little too good at scaring people away

A little too far gone

Like you

A little too far gone

Turn your head 

Shuffle away and pretend you dont notice

The breakdown of a heart

Too drunk on feelings

To know when to stop

 

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30 Comments Add yours

  1. Love the comparisons, very nice

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  2. Wow! Great post!

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  3. Nice one👍

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  4. urvashi7 says:

    Great post. A single poem described a hell of thousand emotions.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Bingo. THANK YOU

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  5. Tammy7711 says:

    Wow!

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  6. Ananya says:

    Wow! Such an emotion provoking poem

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you mam

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  7. Kally says:

    A really good poem!

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you

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  8. I really do like this. It gives me a great feeling of positivity, there’s so much happiness in this.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank You

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  9. ashish132 says:

    the smooth transition in the poem is indeed a highlight with tinge of witty comparison sure is cool work.!

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  10. WOW!! So very me! Thank you, I love this

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      1. VishalDutia says:

        Thank you for lovely appreciation. 💐💐💐

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  11. Isabella says:

    Awakes compassion this poem. Love, Isabella

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  12. A really beautiful one….

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  16. Lovely poem. Unusual and interesting. Think it would be a lot more readable though if you didn’t use the yellow unless that was deliberate on your part – makes it difficult to read. Also, as a fellow poet (www.andreaneidle.wordpress.com), hope you won’t be offended if I say to check your punctuation of it’s (as in its lungs) – no apostrophe needed!
    Best wishes, Andrea

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Appreciate it

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  18. enjoyed the extended metaphor and its directional progression.

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    1. VishalDutia says:

      Thank you sir😊

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